help verify my translation :)

[ronaldhw]

Hi all, can you verify if my translation is correct:

source:
乱心した父にかわって民を救うは我が使命
私の前に道はない
私の後ろに道はできる
それど今こそ魔の都に巣食う邪悪を根絶やしにする時
いっちゃえ
いけるとこまで!!!

Translation:
My mission is to rescue the country replacing my deranged father.
There is no way ahead of me
But I can do something from behind
Now is the time to exterminate the evil seed.
Go,
to the place that I can go

thank you

*edit: changed some of the translation

[Psy]

I'm not a native speaker by any means... but what on earth is this?

Excluding any other comments I might have for the moment, I've not seen anything resembling it before.

[Annihilator]

I was thinking the exact same thing O_o

Since when does いっちゃえ mean I must go? I'd go with something like 行かないとだめ for that...doesn't いっちゃえ mean like..."I'm going to" or something? >.>

[ronaldhw]

i'm not sure my translation is correct, that's why i'm asking here

those words are from a manga ^^;

[Annihilator]

I think we're going to need a native to answer this haha.

(hatch_jp this means you...please?)

[Rod Wadd]

救う this usually means "save, rescue" is there a reason why you chose to use "lead?"

魔の都に葉食う邪 It seems like you left this part out?

[ronaldhw]

I changed that part to rescue

魔の都に葉食う邪 <- compacted this to evil seeds , it should be evil seeds at the evil capital right?

[Rod Wadd]

葉食う I've never seen this expression before and couldn't find it in my dictionary.

How is it read?

[ronaldhw]

sorry typed it wrong >_<

it's 巣食う

edited above as well

[hatch_jp]

乱心した父にかわって民を救うは我が使命
私の前に道はない
私の後ろに道はできる
それど今こそ魔の都に巣食う邪悪を根絶やしにする時
いっちゃえ
いけるとこまで!!!

Literal translation:
My mission is to rescue the citizen filling in for my mad father.
There is no way ahead of me .
The way can be made behind me.
Now is the time to exterminate the evilness nesting in the devil city.
let's get going
to where I can go!!!


「ちゃえ」
1. ～ちゃえ is used when a decision of a reckless action is made.
　ex.1
　( Although I know this cake is my sister's, ) let's eat!
　（これは妹のケーキだけど、）食べちゃえ！

　ex.2
　( The traffic signal is red, but ) let's go!
　（信号は赤だけど、）行っちゃえ！

2. ～ちゃえ is used for encouraging someone to do something bold.
　ex.1
　Why don't you marry her?
　彼女と結婚しちゃえよ。


「巣くう 」
1.　巣を作って住む。
　Something has made its nest and settled.
　ツバメが巣くう：Swallows have made its nest and stayed.

2. 害になるものが集まってそこを根城にする。
　Something harmful get together and dwell there.

[ronaldhw]

thank you very much hatch_jp

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