Needing help with ordering of Kanji

[youngarnold_505647]

皆さん、こんにちは。

One of my friends is a member of the 國際松濤館空手道連盟 (Shōtōkan Karate-do International Federation)and practitioner of 松濤館空手 (Shōtōkan Karate) for 30+ years and is wanting to start his own club locally.
He is wanting something along the lines of: Modern practitioner of Shōtōkan Karate-do
His is wanting the 漢字 to read correctly and sound natural. My 日本語 is not adept enough yet for me to be certain that it is correct, so I am looking for some help.
How is this: 松涛館空手現代武道空手家
Not sure if it needs any particles in or not to sound natural.



ローレンス

[community.japanese]

ローレンスさん、
こんにちは。
松涛館空手現代武道空手家
は「しょうとうかん　からて　げんだい　ぶどう　からてか」です。
自分の道場なんてすごいですね。
Yuki 　由紀
Team JapanesePod101.com

[youngarnold_505647]

由紀先生、こんにちは。

お返事をどうもありがとうございます。

I constructed the sentence with the kanji for the component parts of the sentence, but wasn't sure if it sounded natural.
So the kanij in that order sound natural, and it would be understood by a native speaker?

ローレンス

[community.japanese]

ローレンスさん、
こんにちは。
Well…I really do not sure about karate so I am not sure whether gendai budou is necessary or not…
すみません。

Yuki 　由紀
Team JapanesePod101.com