How can someone check my translation?

[wiseroks2651]

Is there any way I can have person check my translation to these sentences?
I want to go to a graduate school. I hope I can receive a scholarship.
大学院に行きたいんです。しょうがくきん　（奨学金）をもらうといいんですが。
OR
奨学金をもらえるといいんですが。(because it has can which would make the verb into a potential verb right?
There is an exam tomorrow morning. I hope that I do not oversleep.
明日の朝　試験があるんです。あさねぼうしないといいんですが。
（朝寝坊する）
If I was a Japanese person, I would not need to study Japanese so much. 　
日本人だったら、もっと日本語を勉強しなくてもいいです

[community.japanese]

wiseroks2651-san,
こんにちは。
I wasn't sure what exactly your question or request was, so I'll stick to the first matter
("I want to go to a graduate school. I hope I can receive a scholarship" part)

奨学金をもらえるといいんですが。(because it has can which would make the verb into a potential verb right?

This is much better

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Natsuko (奈津子),
Team JapanesePod101.com