JockZon wrote:The Bride: koroshitemashiiteshita wa kore dake?
Gogo: hai~!
The Bride: gogo dare?
Gogo: bingo socchi wa burakku manbi
The Bride: uwasa ga hitori arukishiteru mitai dare
Gogo: Sou dana
The Bride: Bosu wo mamoru gimu ga aru no ga yokurekatteru demo onegai… doite
Gogo: fufufu、onegaigoto no tsumori? motto mashi natanomi hounaino?
I could be way wrong as usual
Yeah, your kana still needs a little work.
The Bride: Koroshite hoshii teshita wa, koredake?
Gogo: Hai~!
The Bride: Gogo da ne?
Gogo: Bingo. Socchi wa Burakku Manba.
The Bride: Uwasa ga hitori-aruki shiteru mitai da ne.
Gogo: Sou da na.
The Bride: Bosu wo mamoru gimu ga aru no ga yoku wakatteru. Demo, onegai... Doite.
Gogo: Fufufu, onegaigoto no tsumori? Motto mashi-na tanomi hou nai no?
Some of it doesn't seem right. For example, I'm 99.9% sure that "mashi" should be "maji".