Who wants it first?

[Kenjhee]

Would an appropriate translation be, "Dare ga saisho ni kore o nozonde imasu ka."? (Talking to dogs, by the way.)

[Murius]

I'd go for "最初は誰?"/ saisho wa dare? Though it might be improper if talking to a dog of superior status

If I get what you want to say right I'd use something like verb+たい (食べたい, 遊びたい...) and ほしい.

In the end I guess I'd say "誰がほしい?" while waving the toy / candy.

However I'm nowhere near sure of what I am saying, gotta wait for the king... the Gooseking.

[Kenjhee]

Thank you, Murius. I like your first one. I think I'll use that. Thanks again.

Kevin

[community.japanese]

Kevinka san, Murius san,
Konnichiwa.
"Dare ga saisho ni kore o nozonde imasuka sounds more formal than ‘darega saisho ni hoshi?’
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[Kenjhee]

ありがとうございました!

[community.japanese]

Kevinka さん、
どういたしまして。
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