I'm now working on Beginner lesson, but I want to improve better so I find other books to support the grammar. I try to create some sentences according to the book's example accompany with the words I have been learning from JapanesePod101. I would be appreciate it if someone can check them for me.
This is to use に in the sentence about time (and place)
Example : He comes here once a year.
Japanese : 彼は一年に一度ここに来ます。
1) I eat cake once a month.
私は一月に一度ケーキを食べます。
2) She goes to meet him around 3 days a week.
彼女は一週に三日くらい彼を会います。
3) That person goes to the pool once a month.
あの人は一月に一度プールへ行きます。
4) When my elder brother feel lonely, he will go there.
私の兄さんは寂しいの時にあそこに行きます。
5) When he has free time, he will go to the book stores.
彼は暇の時に本売り場に行きます。
6) He studies at home.
彼は家にべんきょうします。
7) My elder sister's boy friend goes to library once a week.
僕の姉さんの彼氏は一週に二回図書館に行きます。
The truth is that she meets her father only two days in a year.
実に、彼女は一年に二日だけ父さんを会います。
9) She watches movie in her free time.
彼女は暇の時に映画をみます。
10) He sees his senior's face once a day.
彼は一日に一度先輩の顔を見えます。