Did I translate it right from english to japanese?

[Lazy]

A short speech to the people to be motivated and achieve their dreams in life.

生活の中で彼らの夢を達成するために人をやる気にさせる短いスピーチを。

Did I translate it right from english to japanese?

[community.japanese]

Lazyさん、
It’s a bit hard to translate when I don’t know the background…
If I were you, I would say
人々が人生の夢に到達できるよう、意欲を持てるよう励ます短いスピーチ
Yuki 由紀
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