Is my sentances right ?

[frazer151]

yes my romanjii is probley wroung but tell me if the sentances are right

1: Ohayou Gozimus

2: Ohayou

2; Hajimemashite

1: Anata Wa frazer desu ka

2: Hai, Frazer desu, Anata wa ?

1: Sam desu

2: Sayonare

3: Sayonare ne ..... SHINE !

[Ben Bullock]

yes my romanjii is probley wroung

Yes, you have made a couple of mistakes.

but tell me if the sentances are right

Right in what way?

1: Ohayou Gozimus

2: Ohayou

2; Hajimemashite

1: Anata Wa frazer desu ka

2: Hai, Frazer desu, Anata wa ?

1: Sam desu

2: Sayonare

3: Sayonare ne ..... SHINE !

Um, this is a fairly odd conversation. The last bit, "SHINE", means "die!". What are you trying to say?

[taikutsu]

Well to start, I'm going to point out that your English is difficult to understand, so I am not sure what you're asking for. But other than some spelling errors, this looks pretty much like a standard Day 1 textbook conversation, other than the odd "SHINE" at the end, which as Ben Bullock said, means "DIE!" Don't say that.